From 1712c20833839003cbce7343f39cc6c708f08d22 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Tue, 11 Jan 2022 06:51:23 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=92=AC=20More=20of=20first=20scene?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit It's slow going --- script.fountain | 16 +++++++++++----- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/script.fountain b/script.fountain index 6ea6c33..7e8d6ec 100644 --- a/script.fountain +++ b/script.fountain @@ -1,19 +1,21 @@ Title: The Siege of Remontel -Subtitle: A Star Trek fan production. +Source: A Star Trek fan production. Author: Dan Jones Notes: Story for "The Siege of Remontel" text adventure game. +Contact: +Draft date: 2022-01-10 === -A BUNK. +INT. BUNK The bunk is closed. It is dark. Our protagonist is laying in her bed. A red alert klaxon is blaring, having woken her up. -ENSIGN (V.O.) +PROTAGONIST (V.O.) What in the world is that? -ENSIGN +PROTAGONIST Computer, lights. The lights come up, and we see the bunk. It is small, just big enough to fit a single person with a little bit of wiggle room. @@ -22,8 +24,12 @@ Our protagonist keeps it in her bunk to remind herself of why she joined Starfle The protagonist is dressed in the familiar operations uniform, and a single Ensign's pip. -ENSIGN +PROTAGONIST Computer, open my bunk The bunk wall slides open, revealing a hallway which serves as the lower deck quarters. Bunks line the walls. A few other people are slowly waking up, and look confused. +The protagonist climbs out of her bunk. Hers is the second in a stack of three, so there is some space to step down. + +As her feet step down, the alarm stops. +