diff --git a/includes/Characters.inf b/includes/Characters.inf index e4cf91b..8d094e1 100644 --- a/includes/Characters.inf +++ b/includes/Characters.inf @@ -1,8 +1,17 @@ Include "Computer.inf"; NPC pirate_leader "Pirate Leader" - with name 'pirate' 'leader' 'kzinti', - description "The pirate leader is a large, imposing, Kzinti male.^ + with name 'pirate' 'leader' 'tellarite' + description "The Pirate Leader is a stout, but menacing Tellarite.^ + Her large tusks are very prominent, much larger than other + Tellarites you've known.^ + (She must be a northern Tellarite.)^ + Despite her small stature, you can see she's not to be taken lightly." + has ~proper female + +NPC pirate_second "Pirate Second in Command" + with name 'pirate' 'xo' 'kzinti', + description "The pirate XO is a large, imposing, Kzinti male.^ His fangs are clearly visible coming out of his mouth.^ You'd heard that Kzinti were cat-like, but his imposing frame reminds you of a jaquar, ready to pounce on unsuspecting prey." diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md index e7ce130..0f8676a 100644 --- a/notes.md +++ b/notes.md @@ -32,6 +32,10 @@ * Make a joke about being a Northern Tellarite + Should have to insult him to beat some puzzle * Similar to defeating the Sword Master in Monkey Island +- Pirates + + Maybe consists entirely of non-primate species + + Angry with primates taking lead in Federation + + maybe leader should be Tellarite [Zakdorn]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Zakdorn [Rhaandarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Rhaandarite