From 81c2bb55b0dd7cb17670c3c9135a3a2a90c1f9d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Sun, 30 Jan 2022 16:43:50 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 01/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=92=AC=20More=20of=20script?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- script.fountain | 13 +++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+) diff --git a/script.fountain b/script.fountain index 1185c23..0ec3551 100644 --- a/script.fountain +++ b/script.fountain @@ -41,3 +41,16 @@ Attention crew of the USS Remontel. Your captain, bridge crew, and senior office Anybody who attempts to oppose us will be met with a swift end. If you stay where you are and do not interfere in our plans, you will be released safely shortly. The protagonist stands there, a bit dumbfounded. Why would someone capture this, of all ships? The Remontel is one of the most insignificant ships in the fleet. + +She looks around and notices several other junior officers standing around, confused, scared, and unsure. Her friend, Ensign Christi Gomez, stands next to her. + +PROTAGONIST +Christi, what are we going to do? + +GOMEZ +I don't know. Should we try to contact Starfleet? + +Ensign Ruux, a Rhaandarite, stands nearby. He is soft-spoken, and very tall. His wide forehead is a prominent feature. + +RUUX +I don't think we should do anything. You heard him. All the senior officers have been taken. Whoever our captors are, they've already outsmarted the best of us. We should do what they say and hope they'll let us go. From 9ff44ba57efa4a285408ea0a0234b8eb46caf048 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Sun, 30 Jan 2022 20:11:09 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 02/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=92=A1=20Add=20some=20notes=20for?= =?UTF-8?q?=20ideas?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- notes.md | 23 +++++++++++++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+) create mode 100644 notes.md diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..502cd0d --- /dev/null +++ b/notes.md @@ -0,0 +1,23 @@ +# Notes + +## Character ideas + +- Christi Gomez + + Species: Human + + Ensign +- Ruux + + Need first name, maybe + + Species: [Rhaandarite][] + + Young: 78 years old + + Naive, insecure +- Dorkna Miklis + + Species: [Zakdorn][] + + Weasley, untrustworthy + + Probably another ensign +- Need a Catian or Kzinti + + Kzinti pirate + - Maybe the leader + + Maybe Caitian crew member can relate to, or seduce, him + +[Zakdorn]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Zakdorn +[Rhaandarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Rhaandarite From 83facdc4d0803c659f7e76873f3d01e68b45686f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Fri, 4 Feb 2022 11:17:40 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 03/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=92=A1=20Add=20a=20few=20more=20not?= =?UTF-8?q?es=20regarding=20Kzinti?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- notes.md | 8 +++++++- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md index 502cd0d..37ed75d 100644 --- a/notes.md +++ b/notes.md @@ -14,10 +14,16 @@ + Species: [Zakdorn][] + Weasley, untrustworthy + Probably another ensign -- Need a Catian or Kzinti +- Need a Catian or [Kzinti][] + Kzinti pirate - Maybe the leader + - [Further resource][Kzinti-Theurgy] + Maybe Caitian crew member can relate to, or seduce, him + - Maybe not. Kzinti females are not intelligent + - Also Kzinti only mate for reproduction + - But, maybe might work [Zakdorn]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Zakdorn [Rhaandarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Rhaandarite +[Kzinti]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Kzinti +[Kzinti-Theurgy]: https://uss-theurgy.com/w/index.php?title=Kzinti From 6f44b6f01d5917c15fe93c101bf2f87919b3db00 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 16:41:31 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 04/10] =?UTF-8?q?=E2=9C=A8=20Add=20characters=20in=20lower?= =?UTF-8?q?=5Fdecks?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- includes/Characters.inf | 24 +++++++++++++++++++++++- includes/Classes.inf | 9 ++++++++- includes/MoreVerbs.inf | 9 +++++++++ 3 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/includes/Characters.inf b/includes/Characters.inf index 0dae525..e4cf91b 100644 --- a/includes/Characters.inf +++ b/includes/Characters.inf @@ -1,3 +1,25 @@ Include "Computer.inf"; -NPC pirate_leader "Pirate Leader"; +NPC pirate_leader "Pirate Leader" + with name 'pirate' 'leader' 'kzinti', + description "The pirate leader is a large, imposing, Kzinti male.^ + His fangs are clearly visible coming out of his mouth.^ + You'd heard that Kzinti were cat-like, but his imposing frame + reminds you of a jaquar, ready to pounce on unsuspecting prey." + has ~proper male; + +NPC gomez "Christi Gomez" lower_decks + with name 'ensign' 'christi' 'gomez', + description "Ensign Christi Gomez is your best friend on the ship.^ + You and she attended the academy together, and were + thrilled to be assigned to the same ship.", + found_in lower_decks + has female; + +NPC ruux "Ruux" lower_decks + with name 'ensign' 'ruux' 'rhaandarite', + description "Ensign Ruux is a Rhaandarite. He has a wide and high forehead.^ + He is calm and soft-spoken, and very tall by human standards.^ + At 78 years old, he is quite young for his species.", + found_in lower_decks + has male; diff --git a/includes/Classes.inf b/includes/Classes.inf index 5a7e9d4..3afa53e 100644 --- a/includes/Classes.inf +++ b/includes/Classes.inf @@ -29,4 +29,11 @@ Class Decoration ! ], ! has supporter; -Class NPC has animate; \ No newline at end of file +Class NPC + with life [; + Answer,Ask,Order,Tell: + "Just Talk To ", (the) self, "."; + Talk: + "Hello, Ensign."; + ], + has animate proper; diff --git a/includes/MoreVerbs.inf b/includes/MoreVerbs.inf index e69de29..095bd4a 100644 --- a/includes/MoreVerbs.inf +++ b/includes/MoreVerbs.inf @@ -0,0 +1,9 @@ +[ TalkSub; + if (noun == player) print_ret "Nothing you hear surprises you."; + if (RunLife(noun,##Talk) ~= false) return; + "At the moment, you can't think of anything to say."; +]; + +Verb 'talk' 't//' 'converse' 'chat' 'gossip' + * 'to'/'with' creature -> Talk + * creature -> Talk; From e87d0f3e9626846906d31be6358ff73e9163598e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Tue, 1 Mar 2022 20:55:16 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 05/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=93=9D=20Jot=20some=20notes?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- notes.md | 5 +++++ 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+) diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md index 37ed75d..d1abf38 100644 --- a/notes.md +++ b/notes.md @@ -22,8 +22,13 @@ - Maybe not. Kzinti females are not intelligent - Also Kzinti only mate for reproduction - But, maybe might work +- [Cygnian][] + + Has some type of clairvoyance + + Maybe good pirate + + cat-like [Zakdorn]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Zakdorn [Rhaandarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Rhaandarite [Kzinti]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Kzinti [Kzinti-Theurgy]: https://uss-theurgy.com/w/index.php?title=Kzinti +[Cygnian]: https://memory-beta.fandom.com/wiki/Cygnian From 3d9ce3bf2929fd6a4d2c5f52631d0d68d7abbbc4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Wed, 23 Mar 2022 13:10:13 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 06/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=93=9D=20Add=20idea=20for=20Tellari?= =?UTF-8?q?te=20character?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- notes.md | 8 ++++++++ 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+) diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md index d1abf38..e7ce130 100644 --- a/notes.md +++ b/notes.md @@ -26,9 +26,17 @@ + Has some type of clairvoyance + Maybe good pirate + cat-like +- [Tellarite][] + + Should be one of the pirates + + Should have prominent tusks, like [Tevrin Krit][] + * Make a joke about being a Northern Tellarite + + Should have to insult him to beat some puzzle + * Similar to defeating the Sword Master in Monkey Island [Zakdorn]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Zakdorn [Rhaandarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Rhaandarite [Kzinti]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Kzinti [Kzinti-Theurgy]: https://uss-theurgy.com/w/index.php?title=Kzinti [Cygnian]: https://memory-beta.fandom.com/wiki/Cygnian +[Tellarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Tellarite +[Tevrin Krit]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Tevrin_Krit From aeba1996ba0c5113063186477f59c41d8aa8e97f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Sun, 23 Oct 2022 13:50:50 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 07/10] =?UTF-8?q?=E2=9C=A8=20Demote=20Kzinti=20Pirate?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- includes/Characters.inf | 13 +++++++++++-- notes.md | 4 ++++ 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/includes/Characters.inf b/includes/Characters.inf index e4cf91b..8d094e1 100644 --- a/includes/Characters.inf +++ b/includes/Characters.inf @@ -1,8 +1,17 @@ Include "Computer.inf"; NPC pirate_leader "Pirate Leader" - with name 'pirate' 'leader' 'kzinti', - description "The pirate leader is a large, imposing, Kzinti male.^ + with name 'pirate' 'leader' 'tellarite' + description "The Pirate Leader is a stout, but menacing Tellarite.^ + Her large tusks are very prominent, much larger than other + Tellarites you've known.^ + (She must be a northern Tellarite.)^ + Despite her small stature, you can see she's not to be taken lightly." + has ~proper female + +NPC pirate_second "Pirate Second in Command" + with name 'pirate' 'xo' 'kzinti', + description "The pirate XO is a large, imposing, Kzinti male.^ His fangs are clearly visible coming out of his mouth.^ You'd heard that Kzinti were cat-like, but his imposing frame reminds you of a jaquar, ready to pounce on unsuspecting prey." diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md index e7ce130..0f8676a 100644 --- a/notes.md +++ b/notes.md @@ -32,6 +32,10 @@ * Make a joke about being a Northern Tellarite + Should have to insult him to beat some puzzle * Similar to defeating the Sword Master in Monkey Island +- Pirates + + Maybe consists entirely of non-primate species + + Angry with primates taking lead in Federation + + maybe leader should be Tellarite [Zakdorn]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Zakdorn [Rhaandarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Rhaandarite From 9c2142ea66988b3d49f825b976ed329305b39fd5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Tue, 25 Oct 2022 09:54:51 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 08/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=90=9B=20Missing=20punctuation?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- includes/Characters.inf | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/includes/Characters.inf b/includes/Characters.inf index 8d094e1..3cafb94 100644 --- a/includes/Characters.inf +++ b/includes/Characters.inf @@ -1,20 +1,20 @@ Include "Computer.inf"; NPC pirate_leader "Pirate Leader" - with name 'pirate' 'leader' 'tellarite' + with name 'pirate' 'leader' 'tellarite', description "The Pirate Leader is a stout, but menacing Tellarite.^ - Her large tusks are very prominent, much larger than other + Her large tusks are very prominent, much larger than other Tellarites you've known.^ (She must be a northern Tellarite.)^ - Despite her small stature, you can see she's not to be taken lightly." - has ~proper female + Despite her small stature, you can see she's not to be taken lightly.", + has ~proper female; NPC pirate_second "Pirate Second in Command" with name 'pirate' 'xo' 'kzinti', description "The pirate XO is a large, imposing, Kzinti male.^ His fangs are clearly visible coming out of his mouth.^ You'd heard that Kzinti were cat-like, but his imposing frame - reminds you of a jaquar, ready to pounce on unsuspecting prey." + reminds you of a jaquar, ready to pounce on unsuspecting prey.", has ~proper male; NPC gomez "Christi Gomez" lower_decks From 0289dc1563504aa274f77ea1919b3ded5ad3a4ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Fri, 13 Jan 2023 12:14:31 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 09/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=92=A1=20Update=20some=20info=20fro?= =?UTF-8?q?m=20#WritingWonders?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- notes.md | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md index 0f8676a..848a1a9 100644 --- a/notes.md +++ b/notes.md @@ -3,7 +3,9 @@ ## Character ideas - Christi Gomez - + Species: Human + + Species: Vissian + + Third gender + + Parents defected to Federation so that she could have a real life + Ensign - Ruux + Need first name, maybe From a0790c1ea0c1299bed985d1df713d253ff5322dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dan Jones Date: Fri, 13 Jan 2023 13:43:46 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 10/10] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=92=A1=20More=20#WritingWonders=20n?= =?UTF-8?q?otes?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- notes.md | 12 ++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+) diff --git a/notes.md b/notes.md index 848a1a9..4f8fb95 100644 --- a/notes.md +++ b/notes.md @@ -39,6 +39,18 @@ + Angry with primates taking lead in Federation + maybe leader should be Tellarite +## Plot ideas + +Time period: couple years after the Khitomer Accords. There is peace with +Klingons. Romulans have been relatively quiet. The Federation is at relative +piece with the two known quadrants. + +Must defeat pirate captain with battle of insults. Could be modeled after Sword +Master in Secret of Monkey Island. + +Should include a holodeck challenge. Holodeck should be a very new tecnology at +this time. + [Zakdorn]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Zakdorn [Rhaandarite]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Rhaandarite [Kzinti]: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Kzinti