💬 More of first scene

It's slow going
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Title: The Siege of Remontel
Subtitle: A Star Trek fan production.
Source: A Star Trek fan production.
Author: Dan Jones
Notes:
Story for "The Siege of Remontel" text adventure game.
Contact: <danjones@goodevilgenius.org>
Draft date: 2022-01-10
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A BUNK.
INT. BUNK
The bunk is closed. It is dark. Our protagonist is laying in her bed. A red alert klaxon is blaring, having woken her up.
ENSIGN (V.O.)
PROTAGONIST (V.O.)
What in the world is that?
ENSIGN
PROTAGONIST
Computer, lights.
The lights come up, and we see the bunk. It is small, just big enough to fit a single person with a little bit of wiggle room.
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The protagonist is dressed in the familiar operations uniform, and a single Ensign's pip.
ENSIGN
PROTAGONIST
Computer, open my bunk
The bunk wall slides open, revealing a hallway which serves as the lower deck quarters. Bunks line the walls. A few other people are slowly waking up, and look confused.
The protagonist climbs out of her bunk. Hers is the second in a stack of three, so there is some space to step down.
As her feet step down, the alarm stops.