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Title: The Siege of Remontel
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Title: The Siege of Remontel
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Subtitle: A Star Trek fan production.
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Source: A Star Trek fan production.
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Author: Dan Jones
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Author: Dan Jones
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Notes:
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Notes:
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Story for "The Siege of Remontel" text adventure game.
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Story for "The Siege of Remontel" text adventure game.
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Contact: <danjones@goodevilgenius.org>
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Draft date: 2022-01-10
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A BUNK.
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INT. BUNK
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The bunk is closed. It is dark. Our protagonist is laying in her bed. A red alert klaxon is blaring, having woken her up.
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The bunk is closed. It is dark. Our protagonist is laying in her bed. A red alert klaxon is blaring, having woken her up.
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ENSIGN (V.O.)
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PROTAGONIST (V.O.)
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What in the world is that?
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What in the world is that?
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ENSIGN
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PROTAGONIST
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Computer, lights.
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Computer, lights.
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The lights come up, and we see the bunk. It is small, just big enough to fit a single person with a little bit of wiggle room.
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The lights come up, and we see the bunk. It is small, just big enough to fit a single person with a little bit of wiggle room.
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The protagonist is dressed in the familiar operations uniform, and a single Ensign's pip.
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The protagonist is dressed in the familiar operations uniform, and a single Ensign's pip.
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ENSIGN
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PROTAGONIST
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Computer, open my bunk
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Computer, open my bunk
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The bunk wall slides open, revealing a hallway which serves as the lower deck quarters. Bunks line the walls. A few other people are slowly waking up, and look confused.
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The bunk wall slides open, revealing a hallway which serves as the lower deck quarters. Bunks line the walls. A few other people are slowly waking up, and look confused.
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The protagonist climbs out of her bunk. Hers is the second in a stack of three, so there is some space to step down.
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As her feet step down, the alarm stops.
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